One day at the river there was a great rescue staring Premo a little white mouse with a few brown spots, Reginald a black sheepdog with a few white patches. Goodmen a little brown fantail and John Reginald’s owner. They live in a little brown cottage near the deep blue river. Around them was a huge green forest.
One day John decided to take Reginald down to the river. John threw a stick for Reginald. Reginald swam out to get it. John saw Reginald get sucked under the water he let out a huge BARK! Premo heard a huge bark and ran out to investigate .He saw Reginald and then before you could say “Swiss cheese” he had scurried back into his mouse hole and threw on his swimsuit and had jumped in the river. He started doing freestyle to Reginald. Then Premo was squeaking in the whirlpool.
Goodmen the fantail woke up to a racket. He flew outside to do some good yelling. He got quite a fright seeing a drowning dog and mouse. Straight away he turned back into the marine he used to be when he was younger.He flew so fast you could only see a blur. He was right above Reginald then Goodmen pecked him he pecked him so hard he went flying out of the whirlpool. Then he flew down and picked up Premo and dropped him on the ground. John was so grateful that he said Premo can come stay with their mouse Jerry. Goodmen can come stay with their budgie.
By Luca.W
Awesome story luca w. It is very very very awesome.
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great work luca.w
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I really felt like I was watching the rescue in person. Very good detail. Keep writing!!
ReplyDeletehey im in auckland now BORING! but fantastic story luca.w!!
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By Luca W