At the weekend I went to the river. I went with my mum, Greg, Kayne and the bear. I loved being at the river. Then we went home. I played the Wii. The next day we went to the Warehouse. My bear said "can we get shoes for Caitlin?" and mum said "Yes".
Then we went home and went to bed.
By Caitlin
I think that your bear is really cool Caitlin.
ReplyDeleteTeam 19 thinks your bear is cute.
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I've got two care bears their names are funshine and flowers.
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Awesome teddy Caitlin. I enjoyed your story.I like going to rivers too, I like swimming and fishing in them. Jordan Team19
ReplyDeleteWe like your story Caitlin and your comment Jordan!! We think it is important to explain why you think the story is cool!!
ReplyDeleteWe like your story because you have included punctuation, tried to use speech marks and included a picture.
I want to add my story to the blog. If I could it would be about staying at my cousins sages house. I watch movies there and play on tech decks. Nadia
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ReplyDeleteI think your story is really amazing
and your bear is cute
Anna R
I think the the games are really awsome!!!
ReplyDeleteAnna s
i rekin your wrting is arsome korban
ReplyDeleteI love your bear story. From Bex (Caitlins Mum)
ReplyDeletei think that story is awesome caitlin. by brooke
ReplyDeleteI loved that bear caitlin and your story was amazing lol ha ha ha
ReplyDeleteby hayley.
That stoy is todile awrsome ,amazing bear fab work caitlin!!!!!!. bykorban
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